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Sequence - Footle - All Hallows' Eve

The doomed entombed Now rise death cries In fear we hear Death trills blood chills...... Inspired by Donna Goldens' Footle Fright contest

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Date: 10/27/2009 11:25:00 PM
woderful and scary a very indepth piece for Halloween and Congratulations on your win,,and Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 10/27/2009 7:20:00 AM
congrats on the second place, great poem!!
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Date: 10/26/2009 4:52:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your second place finish in the footle contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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Date: 10/26/2009 4:03:00 PM
Well done Robin and congrats on your win. Thank you for your comments on mine. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2009 2:08:00 PM
You go Gal!!! Big winner!! Light & Love
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Date: 10/26/2009 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Robin! Love your footle series. A well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2009 6:32:00 AM
Great job, Robin! Congratulations!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/26/2009 4:15:00 AM
Congrats in you win in Donna's footle contest >> James
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Date: 10/26/2009 3:34:00 AM
Congrats on your EXCELLENT footle win, Robin
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Date: 10/26/2009 3:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Donna's contest Robin. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2009 12:19:00 AM
A Royal footle success , QR and well done ....
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Date: 10/25/2009 10:22:00 PM
Wonderful footle, Robin! Congratulations on your placing in the Footle Fright contest! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/18/2009 10:06:00 PM
a powerful sequence of words and thoughts that set forth the Halloween theme so very well,,,,Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 10/17/2009 9:07:00 AM
the only time of year to laugh at monsters and horror. i love it. jhl
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Date: 10/16/2009 7:03:00 PM
Awsome footle Robin, Wickedly witty, my Lady! Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 10/16/2009 5:34:00 PM
yike scary wow! Light & Love
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:44:00 PM
Awesome Footle Robin, if this don't get into the winners enclosure > i should be turned into a pumpkin for my prediction not being proven to be true >> James
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Date: 10/16/2009 1:38:00 PM
great job, nicely penned.
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Date: 10/16/2009 12:28:00 PM
We must bow to the footle Mistress! This is quite a wicked write! Oops, I think I hear something groaning at the door. Could it be? Oh, no! Robin was right! Love you, dear. Carolyn
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Date: 10/16/2009 12:21:00 PM
Excellent sequence QR, this was a fun contest...Raul
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Date: 10/16/2009 12:01:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/16/2009 9:52:00 AM
Great entry to the contest Robin.. a spooky tale told in few words! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/16/2009 8:52:00 AM
Yikes! Fitting for Halloween. I like the strong ending. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 10/16/2009 7:36:00 AM
These are good...good luck in the contest...Marty
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