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~ open are the gates and children walk hand in hand . . . tears of angels fall ~ May 21, 2013 Senryu In memory of the children from Oklahoma Toronado May 20, 2013 Submitted to the contest, One Senryu

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  1. Date: 5/24/2013 3:25:00 PM
    sad but beautiful, Constance.

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 7:39:00 AM
    - Bless those little angels children - terrible tragedy of losing their children.- So sad. - Well done Constance ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 7:02:00 AM
    I cried for these children as well my friend, that was a tragic event that happened in Oklahoma, it was terrible that so many children died! Your Senryu described the pain and grief of this situation so very well Constance! It also told of the unity of the children entering heaven! What a gorgeous piece, such a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 6:48:00 AM
    sad indeed