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Too Late

indestructible this is what I thought I was - to late for regrets reality check in a moment life finished - so not immortal _____________________ August 29, 2012 Poetry/Senryu/too late Copyright Protected, ID 08-417-058-29 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, If I didn't think what I think here's what I'd think sponsor, Nancy Jones, NA, Judged 09/24/2012

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Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/10/2012 10:04:00 AM

good one! good luck

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/1/2012 7:51:00 AM

wonderful heartfelt Senryu, Constance, hope you are well.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/30/2012 2:50:00 PM

yes, heartfelt write indeed, my friend. Hope you are feeling much stronger x

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/29/2012 2:56:00 PM

Immortality slaps you once in a while for a reality check. Hope you are feeling better! Did you have a transplant? and is it doing well?

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/29/2012 2:46:00 PM

Brilliantly written write my friend! I love how you wove this write together with the contest feeling, the intimate feel of this poem is astounding Constance! I truly enjoyed reading this piece this evening, Great Work!!