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Seascape Haiku Verse 2 - How Deep?

The deepest ocean Becomes shallow at the edge How deep will you go? Co-inspired by Raul's contest and by our minister's talk today on Integral Spirals of Consciousness, going higher and deeper in stages and states.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/12/2010 3:34:00 AM

So many times we block our growth by saying within our mind I can't go there for we have to go there and work through that though and come out on the other side a victor ...Very deep thinking that you have penned....Your kind comments on my work made my day...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2010 5:17:00 PM

wow, you really went "deep" with this one. Very nice. And thanks for your lovely comments to me today. Luv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/21/2010 5:07:00 AM

by the way, considering your comment... you may want to check out "Interior Castle" by Teresa of Avila...and other works by her , I think also "Fire Within". Up to you.... thanks for your comments and for sharing your poems.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/15/2010 12:07:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Linda. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/14/2010 7:09:00 PM

I like it. Such a great question. It asks so much in so little words.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2010 7:06:00 PM

A great Haiku for the contest Linda dn good luck with this "beauty" .. my entry is Serenity.. these contests allow us many outlets to grow in creativity .. I just enjoy the competition and challenge of them.. a wonderful entry Linda.. luv.. Linda-Marie..