Supershark

I circle and scan the green seas with eagle eyes I dive past the speed of sound to spear my prey I swim the shallows, exploring glittering, coral gardens I nibble mindlessly at an angry, frightened octopus... I am Pisces I am Supershark I have returned I am home Beware the Pisces Pisces is dangerous Pisces never rests Pisces never stops Until he knows why... Born of waters A child of waters The mighty power of waters haunt my dreams...

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2014 1:43:00 AM

As a student of astrology I don't agree to the last stanza. Pisces are always, sober and well-behaved people in general if not receiving bad aspects from the other evil planets. Tim

Paul Callus

Date: 8/24/2014 5:52:00 PM

Loved your poem, Tim, starting from the title down to the last line. very entertaining. Congrats on a very merited win. // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/24/2014 3:25:00 PM

Fellow Pisces here and enjoyed your captivating poem! Congrats on your win!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2014 11:41:00 AM

- Hey Tim, congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest: Zodiac Sign, sponsored by: Leonora Galinta - A very well written poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 8/24/2014 10:21:00 AM

A very beautiful poem on zodiac sign you’ve penned my dear poet friend,Tim! I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Congratulations on your great win! So much thanks as well for your loving support. Biggest hugs and cheers! Love lots always, Leonora

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/24/2014 10:12:00 AM

Tim, congratulations on a wonderful win! Excellent write for a well-deserved placement! Pandita

Heather Ober

Date: 3/5/2013 8:14:00 AM

This is absolutely fascinating! You grabbed my attention with the title, but the poem itself sucked me right in. I love the image of "glittering, coral gardens."

Len Gasun

Date: 3/5/2013 6:57:00 AM

Big congratulations on your super win and lovely write my dear friend, Tim! love/hugs, Leonora

Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/5/2013 12:28:00 AM

Awesome write here Tim,,,, are you really Pieces ? My older sis is Pieces . congrats on your win. Thank you for reading Robert Lee,,, his dad's family kinda thought I was naming him George Jones,, his dad's name, like five generations back to Portugal ;}

Donna Jones

Date: 3/4/2013 7:39:00 PM

Congratulations:-)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/4/2013 7:23:00 AM

Congrats Tim on your win. Connie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/3/2013 10:07:00 PM

Many many congrats for this wonderful win Tim.

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/3/2013 8:51:00 PM

Big Congratulations!!!! Tiberius what a fabulous write!!! Big huggsss dolly

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2013 3:59:00 PM

YESSSS, this is one I love seeing on a winners list. Congrats!!

David Williams

Date: 3/3/2013 2:59:00 PM

Tim, congrats on your win...David

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/3/2013 2:38:00 PM

Hi Pisces.........shoud we be scared!??? Great poem for a guy with eagle eyes!! Congratulations!!! And hope your birthday recently was sensational!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/3/2013 9:49:00 AM

Tim, thank you for the nice and beautiful poem, many blessings with your wonderful win~ PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2013 1:37:00 PM

I like the idea and presentation..Good work..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the kind review..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/1/2013 12:55:00 PM

Like a sea gypsy that me. Tim an awesome poem. Make sure you get your metal detector out and barefoot down the beach-treasures to find. Warm Smiles, Connie

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/1/2013 10:42:00 AM

Always a delight to read, Tim. Well done as usual. I hope all is well. Always, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2013 7:52:00 AM

ooooh, this is GREAT writing!!!!! I hope my mention of your sun sign inspired you to post it?