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Rip -Roaring

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Rip -Roaring

R andom radicals rush rip-roariously on ward 
O nerously oggling on-lookers abroad
A nnealing axle-grease atop ankle-high boots   
D eliberately dashing dilettante seekers
T raveling tenaciously toward tree-lined detours 
R oad rage roars, racers recline, rear-wheels wheelie 
I mprobable instances intoxicate incalculable intensity
Probably, they'd get there alive!?
S irens sound

E mptiness emanates extravehicular extemes 
N ickle-plated, nonentities now
D eath, death, dangles
I nsanities inane inference 
N ickle-plated, nonentities now
G one.

Contest:GROOVE IT ! Free Poetry Contest Details
Style: Heavy Metal
Date:10/9/13 revised
Poet: Debbie Guzzi

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 5/24/2014 6:27:00 AM
    You wrote a winner, well done. I'm checking out poetry styles for a piece I'm considering, had even been thinking of alliterations, but you've got me re-thinking. Did you mean "their??" 2nd to last line 1st stanza. Still in awe, Scott

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 5/24/2014 8:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THanks Scott YES, there! THANKS
  1. Date: 11/3/2013 1:04:00 PM
    Extreme talent mixed with clever wit. I admire poets who take off on tangents that stretch the limits. Well done and congrats !

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:26:00 PM
    DG , enjoyed your GROOVE IT win............. ~LOVE SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 6:41:00 PM
    I'm groovin' it right with you cher!...YOU a heavy metal fan? The painter/coffee shop/yoga/therapist from New England?? Wonders never cease...You got some SERIOUS alliteration going on here and how the heck did you combine it with whatever that other form is called? Congrats - Tim

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 11:58:00 AM
    interesting Debbie, 2 -in -1... love it... ... congratulations on your win...LINDA

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 10:17:00 AM
    Annealing axle-grease atop ankle-high are the queen of wonderful metaphors!!! I love it !!

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 8:05:00 PM
    creative write, you grooved it right into a win, congrats :) hugs

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 12:16:00 PM
    jeepers, this is rock- and roll, debbie.. put on your suede shoes and do the hip-twisting sway... yeah, cool!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 11:42:00 AM
    Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah,Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit A great duo POEM Acrostic Alliteration Superb Quill. I am slowly coming back to writing again I Thank-YOU for YOUR Prayers and well Wishes and YOUR Gracious Comments I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:15:00 PM
    I appreciate the skill that it took to pen this one but it didn't do it for me. I much prefer other pieces you have written.

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 6:41:00 PM
    Not so sure about their arrival..Enjoyed reading the creative contest entry though..Thanks for the visits to my work..He knows your name for sure..Do you know His?..Sara

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 5:12:00 PM
    haha, cool last line. I really like this one, Debs.