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As I read the words of a skinny girl My tears fell to the page Pain and hope interspersed A woman who wanted change I saw her reflection in my mirror She was most certainly there A spirit of substance Calling from a distance I could not help but be aware I ran my mind Through her words I danced along each note Her spirit gifted with distinction Raised a lump inside my throat I reached across the ocean Of the tears that had been shed Thankful for such honesty In the words that I read Images of substance That made me so aware She is not invisible I can see her standing there We humans all struggle In our own different ways We live in broken moments Trapped in our yesterdays Heading towards horizons On the wings of pain Sometimes flying in circles Over and over again Still Within life's dance We struggle and we strive Grasping for pieces of happy Music to make us feel alive We are partially broken Desiring to be whole Reaching out with our words In hopes of healing our soul When we get weary of trying Jesus holds out his hand The One who knows and formed us is the One who understands He desires to protect and remove us from all harm If like a child we run to Him He will wrap us in loving arms After Reading Katie Pukash's poem "Skinny Girl Wants More" that She entered in my Girl Rising Contest I had to find out who wrote it. This is an exceptional and expressive piece of work. Normaly I would not comment on a piece or look up the author but this poem demanded my attention. Thanks Katie for this honest and emotionally relevant piece of work.

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Date: 7/23/2013 10:05:00 AM
Amen and ever so truthful! Thank you for sharing this inspirational message with us all! God bless U!...Milt
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Date: 7/19/2013 1:38:00 AM
That is wonderful to get so inspired by another poet This is good work ,Richard. I hope more of us get inspired in your contest., a very worthy topic.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2013 6:05:00 AM
I was hoping that would be the result but so far there has been little response.. Maybe people are just contemplating what they want to write.
Date: 7/18/2013 11:29:00 PM
you are amazing... SKAT
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2013 12:08:00 AM
I'm blushing SKAT
Date: 7/18/2013 3:15:00 PM
Great work honoring another writer..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2013 12:09:00 AM
Thanks Sara, goodnight.
Date: 7/18/2013 2:54:00 PM
now this one makes me reel, rich.... poignant and filled with emotinal response... i felt you here; stuning work!..:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2013 12:10:00 AM
Thanks Nette your visits always make my day.
Date: 7/18/2013 11:19:00 AM
Awww, Richard, your caring side is once more exposed in this beautiful write, kind person. Daily I'm more and more impressed by your writing skills. Write on, my friend. Licia :-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/18/2013 11:24:00 AM
Thanks Licia
Date: 7/18/2013 8:04:00 AM
I read this poem you speak of. This was a very, very strong response & tribute to her. Very commendable sir!
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/18/2013 11:35:00 AM
Re-read....even better than it already was before. You provided additional light to things. Excellent, again! =D
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/18/2013 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Drake, I have read a number of her poems now. She is a talented and emotive writer.

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