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Rebirth

Winter lacks a fresh air balm
Her sunshine rends little heat
Spring lilacs bloom in glory
Too warm, Winter sleeps

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 10:45:00 AM

Congratulations William on your well deserved win in Francine Robert's contest "Bring On Spring". Love, Carol

Charles Henderson

Date: 1/10/2011 8:14:00 PM

William I could do with a bit of that sleeping winter around here (SC). We're white everywhere. Good write, Charles

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/10/2011 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserv ed win in the contest, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2011 2:03:00 PM

Congratulations, William, glad this little gem made winners' circle. Luv ,Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/9/2011 9:33:00 AM

Congrats Will on your success in the Bring on Spring contest with this lovely version of spring time .. enjoy with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2011 9:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

Date: 1/9/2011 9:11:00 AM

Congrats, Bill. Excellent dodoitsu. Nice going. Enjoyed. Have a great week. Ralph

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/8/2011 10:58:00 PM

You got all the words in four lines. Very clever. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Kash Poet

Date: 1/8/2011 9:03:00 PM

Very cute ! Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/8/2011 7:21:00 PM

I love the short forms..you said so much in a few words..congrats. BG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/8/2011 7:08:00 PM

Gosh, you said it ALL so perfectly in just four lines, William! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/8/2011 6:54:00 PM

thanks for supporting my contest Will and congrats on your 9th place win

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/6/2011 12:03:00 PM

This is like a breath of fresh air, William. Totally enjoyed as I'm just about ready for spring as winter still sleeps! Thanks for reading my poem and the kind comments too. Always, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2011 6:14:00 PM

ahhh, I really love how you did this one so quickly. Minimal words but great use of them!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/4/2011 5:36:00 PM

Well done, the last line is a keeper. BG

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/4/2011 4:46:00 PM

soup mail

Michael Jordan

Date: 1/4/2011 3:30:00 PM

William I think this poem rocks bro. Very concise and well done, mj