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Scent of Rain

The rain, at last, has finally tiptoed in I almost missed the laughter, but for leaves that murmured quick surprise along the eaves It caught my eye, with tapping on the glass as I looked out to see a somber cast bringing change to evening's sky Then, having heard, I left my cozy place and stepped outside to drink the fragrant air And felt the slope of rain upon my face I heard the dance of dripping leaves against the fray of windswept trees And watched the rope of silver coils in casement light, as evening fell Puddles in the nearby street were playgrounds, dancing to a beat Each slanted chain from heaven fell with balmy incense, in the night Then quickly over, like a dream rain scampered east, without a glance and without a chance to wipe its feet Away it flew in fickle flight So brief it came, to quickly cover the leaves, the grass, and even me with showers, sweet, before my sleep But, left the scent, of sweetened clover
......................................................... 11/13/13 Contest: Rain Sponsored by Eve Roper

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Date: 8/16/2016 10:45:00 AM
Nothing can beat the scents of nature!Lovely poem Carrie!
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Date: 8/16/2016 4:08:00 AM
This is just so beautiful Carrie. It's true that rain can bring forth wonderful scents from mother earth.
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Date: 8/15/2016 11:21:00 PM
Beautifully written. Congrats on your win, Carrie. :~))
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Date: 8/15/2016 9:47:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Carrie. Congrats on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/15/2016 7:16:00 PM
Top quality writing Carrie, worthy of the win!
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Date: 8/15/2016 7:08:00 PM
Beautiful wording -- it's free verse, but sounds like rhyme. Poe-like rhythm. One of my favs. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 8/15/2016 5:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie, :)" finally tiptoed in" caught my eye ! Hug Eve
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Date: 8/15/2016 5:02:00 PM
Carrie this was a joy to read...Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:45:00 PM
Carrie, a beautiful poem lady :) congrats on your top placement in the Rain contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 11/25/2013 9:18:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie! Your poem is a first place on my list...a fave!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/23/2013 4:04:00 PM
Delightful winning work.Great poetic quality..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:08:00 AM
very poignantly penned Carrie congrats on fine win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/19/2013 9:36:00 PM
Carrie, , Congratulations on your beautiful FRAGRANCE OF RAIN poem... Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:30:00 PM
I think this is my favorite of them all. just wonderful, Carrie. congrats.
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Carrie
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Date: 11/17/2013 7:11:00 PM
this piece is exquisite Carrie....love the way you penned this one...a winner for sure :)
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:48:00 PM
Nette will swoon. this is so gorgeous. I see you put your name for her. GOOD.
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Date: 11/16/2013 7:22:00 PM
thank you , carrie.. am i missing inclusion of your name?..:) huggs
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Date: 11/15/2013 9:04:00 PM
† You Are Here And Warm, But I Could Look Away And You'd Be Gone - Cuz We Live In A Time, Where Meaning Falls And Sputters From Our Lifes - Yes, And All Of Things That You Said That You Wanted, Come Rushing By With A Horse And A Carriege - Fourteen Joys And Will To Be Merry ˜ Sentimental Whippoorwill, Blowing Through My Mind And Still, Sentimental Journey Your The One *:* Sweet Kisses Beautiful Carrie Richards, Always, John ... Ps., I Love Your Poetry, Forever Have And, Happy Holidays (*
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