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Radiate beginnings

Whispering morning 
Gives birth to a sultry sun
A warming haze grows 

Copyright © Laura Mckenzie

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  1. Date: 12/28/2011 11:22:00 AM
    I like how the sounds of whisper softens to image of the sultry sun.

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 2:12:00 PM
    You are a wonderful poet.I have discovered your poetry only few days back after joining soup in last Nov.

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 10:08:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery, Laura. How are you? Love, Dane

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 3:56:00 AM
    What a morning your words picture Laura. I would love to awake to the images you write about. Have a lovely weekend >> James

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 7:21:00 PM
    Delightful Haiku Laura... Soup Mail.. luv..

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 9:40:00 AM
    well done on the Haiku, nicely done,..p.d

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 6:55:00 AM
    Very descriptive Haiku of the days lately..Sara

  1. Date: 5/3/2010 6:19:00 PM
    Hey Laura, Very nice, Haiku.....Jimmy

  1. Date: 5/1/2010 4:14:00 PM
    A elcoming Haiku. Great job!

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 8:59:00 PM
    this is beautiful. HOw did I ever miss it!! Luv , andrea

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 8:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Laura. Thanks for your comment, but it didn't place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 8:24:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win! Thx for your comments on my write...means a lot!...hugs, Jimmy

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 11:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on lucky 13 Laura, we need to see if we can't start skipping this one, Hu? And go on to # 14. Lol. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 11:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your amazing win, Laura. Your words, so eloquently expressed, add mystery and suspense to the haiku. I love your words choice and imagery. Enjoy your victory and smile! Thanks for your kind comments, Laura. Have a wonderful day. Love and admiration, Andrew.

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 5:50:00 AM
    Congrats Laura on your winning poem in Raul's contest with this wonderful write describing the photo so perfectly.. enjoy your special victory my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 4:54:00 AM
    oh I like this one Laura congrats in placing in contest mine brought up the rear lol loved the imagery too thanks for sharing and for your kind comments to my work keep up the great writing

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 3:46:00 AM
    Laura, congratulations on your success in my Nature's Breath contest...Raul

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 11:30:00 PM
    a delightful Haiku and such wonderful visions you have depicted for sure,,I wish you the best in the contest,,and I want to Thank you for all your visits to my words and for leaving yours behind as well,,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 7:24:00 PM
    nice take on this photo Laura, I can feel the warmth in your writing. good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 6:39:00 PM
    Laura, I just saw your kind comments. This is a great Haiku you have here....really like how the 'whispering morning gives birth to a sultry sun.' Good luck with this fine poem. Chris.