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Race.Religeon.Politics.Poverty.Education.Status.Responsibility.

By separating the "weak" from the "strong," The committed choose the path that is straight, Solving problems before it gets too late, Ready to sing a victorious song. What is right is right! What is wrong is wrong! The responsible create their own fate, Which is the ultimate character trait, Since opportunity will not wait long. The responsible choose to play their role, And want to step up to get the job done. These are the committed who search their soul; Their hearts are considered second to none. United to pursue a common goal, They will never stop until they have won.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/19/2010 8:23:00 PM
Well done Doc, you have a gift glad u can share it with us here at the soup..your buddyett:-) p.d.
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Date: 8/19/2010 3:24:00 PM
i like all these. they are very nice. but i think in the end there are not enough that want to be united. maybe someday but i doubt it. it does sound like a good dream hope it does happen. peace out nathan
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