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question(not finished)

Hold my dead broken body
Spit on my incomplete soul

A question of sorts...
If you are as gentle as you say, and I am as cruel as I know...
In a World of Co-Existence, how do we not all melt like snow?

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    Ruben O.
    Date: 8/10/2009 10:18:00 AM
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    Hey! this is wonderful! I like it, Kalonji. "If you are as gentle as you say, and I am as cruel as I know..."...fantastic line! Ruben.
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 7/25/2009 1:08:00 PM
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    Quite a profound question, Kalonji! This is great food for thought. Love, Carolyn