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Promised Land.

The battle raged on taking its toll on the brave the numbers grew who was there knew how much they gave. A tormented soldier looked over the broken land as his shadow was defined by the sand. He thought to himself did we make a bid to save a man or was we bidding for a far away land. The tormented soldier could do but only stand as his comrades blood filled the sand for he had seen the price of the promised land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/11/2009 9:03:00 AM
Very captivating. Definitely puts me in the scene and definitely disturbs me. Kinda wierd we both submitted religiously motivated war poems simultaneuosly...kinda cool actually. Take care.
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