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Promised land.

The battle raged on
taking its toll on the brave
the numbers grew
who was there knew how much they gave.

A tormented soldier
looked over the broken land
as his shadow was defined by the sand.

He thought to himself
did we make a bid to save a man
or was we bidding for a far away land.

The tormented soldier
could do but only stand
as his comrades blood filled the sand
for he had seen the price of the promised land.

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  1. Date: 3/11/2009 9:03:00 AM
    Very captivating. Definitely puts me in the scene and definitely disturbs me. Kinda wierd we both submitted religiously motivated war poems simultaneuosly...kinda cool actually. Take care.