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Pretty Girl

Pretty girl.
She sits a thousand miles away.
I really want to show her how I do.
Patience is truly a virtue.
I sit waiting, watching from a far.
Is it possible for long distance phone call to bring her close to my heart?
She's got me going crazy.
She's everything I have been searching for.
Pretty girl.
Come kiss me.
And let the traces of the flavor of your lips keep me wanting more. 
I want to show you what my body can do.
I want to feel our fingers intertwine from now until the end of time. 
1,234,567 thoughts running through my mind.
You're running around in my head.
Are your legs getting tired yet? 
Pretty girl oh      so far away.
Yet, everytime I close my eyes I can see you right in front of my face. 
I sit here and I wait.
When that moment comes where you are looking me eye to eye.
When that moment comes where our lips light a spark that could leave this whole place on 
Can't stop.
Won't stop.
This is not just a figment of our imagination.
This is something that four hands have created with such a solid foundation.
Pretty girl.
You sit and you wait a thousand miles away.
Be patient.
Soon enough you will be looking right into my face.
One hand placed at your side.
The other brushing against your cheek.
Let's set this entire place on fire.
Let's light this match and build our own empire.
Built on passion, love, and devoted desire.
Pretty girl you sit and you await from a far.
I promise you one thing that even from this distance you have the entiriety that is my heart.
I've been waiting to show you.
I won't stop nothing now.
Pretty girl.
I'll show you that you are more than just a mere face in the crowd.
I'll grab ahold of your outstretched arms.
I'll pull you close, so that you can feel the beat of my heart.
I won't stop.
I can't stop.
A million and one thoughts scrambled in my mind.
I've left every bridge burning.
This is our time.
Pretty girl this is when we will define the great line.
Everything is in our hands.
You are mine.

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  1. Date: 5/26/2010 7:25:00 AM
    I miss you Logan <3 ):

  1. Date: 4/13/2010 8:57:00 PM
    Hmm... I know who this is about, and I feel jealous(: lol. :)tayluhh! BFFF niguhh!

  1. Date: 3/5/2010 6:24:00 PM
    OMG amazing!!! whos the lucky girl it's about.. lol..

  1. Date: 2/2/2010 1:10:00 PM
    here u go again !!!! another example for being brilliant =)

  1. Date: 1/29/2010 5:29:00 AM
    This is so beautiful love..its all about love....excellent..Charma

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 9:15:00 AM
    Just stopping by to say good morning and hope you have a great day.

  1. Date: 1/23/2010 4:14:00 PM
    thank you for everything.

  1. Date: 1/23/2010 4:14:00 PM
    thank you for everything.

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 1:54:00 PM
    WOOWW!!! This is great!!

  1. Date: 1/14/2010 7:48:00 PM
    Oh my god, finish this. not your best? i LOVE this...please let me know when its done. love you tiger-oh-saurus animal thing lol <33 Rain

  1. Date: 1/14/2010 3:04:00 PM
    enjoyed reading, thanks for the comments.

  1. Date: 1/14/2010 12:44:00 PM
    This is a hot it...Marty