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poetrysoup- A Lovely Group

poetrysoup must finely flourish
This is my most sincere wish
Her difficulties give me anguish
She helps swim every poet-fish

By giving the site my best write
I must supply minds bright light
The site provides enough delight
I must take her to a great height

For a long time the site never opened
I was worried as to what happened
My agonies due to this deepened
No help at all I could usefully send

A site which helps all noble poets
By giving to their emotions outlets
Getting troubles gives great regrets
As all poets got caught in worry-nets

I felt like a sad fish out of water
When the site I could not enter
Due to defect in my brain-computer
Membership problems I did encounter

The site gave kindly clarification
By intimating me the rectification
Proper application of correction
Ended in membership-completion

I felt like hugging my mother
And being kissed by my father
Kindly embraced by my brother
My mind faced nice weather

A site where poets play
And their skill they display
Their ideas they convey
poetrysoup shows a way

Really her presence is a gift
As she gives to emotions lift
If her happiness suffers theft
In the lurch we poets are left

May God bless dear poetrysoup
As she has a lovely poets' group
Using pen we poets form a troop
This Godly site, none can dupe.


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  1. Date: 3/2/2014 12:32:00 PM
    This was a great poem to read today. Congratulations on your poem being featured.Also Thanks for the visit.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 8:17:00 AM
    this is very nice ;}

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 5:29:00 AM
    Dear respected Terrel Martin, Dr. Ram Mehta, God alone made me join this site, As I can post hopefully my write, I worried truly day and night, With my heart carrying weight. I was concerned with my nationality, Thinking it was a disability, The poetry soup-team solved my difficulty, I pledge them my loyalty. Thanks for your praise, It is how nice! A poet create ties, Even after he dies. With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly, mvvenkataraman.

  1. Date: 10/21/2011 5:56:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, mv

  1. Date: 10/21/2011 5:01:00 AM
    Nice little expression concerning our shared interest in Poetry Soup "Venkat" and welcome back everybody!

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 8:36:00 AM
    Dear respected Tony Lane, Carol Brown, elizabeth wesley, Joe Maverick, I am honored by your comments, I deeply love this noble site, God must give me writing power, To fill this site with noble ideas. This site is a gift from the Divinity, You are all Angels blessing me, Through your kindest patronage, I hope to contribute my mite. With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly, mvvenkataraman

  1. Date: 10/14/2011 7:33:00 PM
    I came upon your featured poem,, may i call you M V..? and liked it and the ethos it portrays..

  1. Date: 10/14/2011 7:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week MV. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/14/2011 6:20:00 PM
    Dear friend, Your verse brought a smile and your words are so true. Soup has become a habit, a craving and most of all, a wonderful place to share. I hope your time here is fulfilling and that you feel as I do, that the day isn't complete without it. Thank you for your kind visit and dear words. Elizabeth

  1. Date: 8/11/2011 3:29:00 PM
    It was a pleasure to read your very interesting writing today MV. Thank you for posting your poetry for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/11/2011 10:21:00 AM
    Keep playing. It's why we live. Tony