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poetrysoup must finely flourish This is my most sincere wish Her difficulties give me anguish She helps swim every poet-fish By giving the site my best write I must supply minds bright light The site provides enough delight I must take her to a great height For a long time the site never opened I was worried as to what happened My agonies due to this deepened No help at all I could usefully send A site which helps all noble poets By giving to their emotions outlets Getting troubles gives great regrets As all poets got caught in worry-nets I felt like a sad fish out of water When the site I could not enter Due to defect in my brain-computer Membership problems I did encounter The site gave kindly clarification By intimating me the rectification Proper application of correction Ended in membership-completion I felt like hugging my mother And being kissed by my father Kindly embraced by my brother My mind faced nice weather A site where poets play And their skill they display Their ideas they convey poetrysoup shows a way Really her presence is a gift As she gives to emotions lift If her happiness suffers theft In the lurch we poets are left May God bless dear poetrysoup As she has a lovely poets' group Using pen we poets form a troop This Godly site, none can dupe. SEARCH MY NAME IN GOOGLE OR YAHOO

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Date: 3/2/2014 12:32:00 PM
This was a great poem to read today. Congratulations on your poem being featured.Also Thanks for the visit.... Lucilla
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Date: 6/23/2013 8:17:00 AM
this is very nice ;}
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Date: 10/27/2011 5:29:00 AM
Dear respected Terrel Martin, Dr. Ram Mehta, God alone made me join this site, As I can post hopefully my write, I worried truly day and night, With my heart carrying weight. I was concerned with my nationality, Thinking it was a disability, The poetry soup-team solved my difficulty, I pledge them my loyalty. Thanks for your praise, It is how nice! A poet create ties, Even after he dies. With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly, mvvenkataraman.
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, mv
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:01:00 AM
Nice little expression concerning our shared interest in Poetry Soup "Venkat" and welcome back everybody!
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Date: 10/15/2011 8:36:00 AM
Dear respected Tony Lane, Carol Brown, elizabeth wesley, Joe Maverick, I am honored by your comments, I deeply love this noble site, God must give me writing power, To fill this site with noble ideas. This site is a gift from the Divinity, You are all Angels blessing me, Through your kindest patronage, I hope to contribute my mite. With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly, mvvenkataraman
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Date: 10/14/2011 7:33:00 PM
I came upon your featured poem,, may i call you M V..? and liked it and the ethos it portrays..
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Date: 10/14/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week MV. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2011 6:20:00 PM
Dear friend, Your verse brought a smile and your words are so true. Soup has become a habit, a craving and most of all, a wonderful place to share. I hope your time here is fulfilling and that you feel as I do, that the day isn't complete without it. Thank you for your kind visit and dear words. Elizabeth
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Date: 8/11/2011 3:29:00 PM
It was a pleasure to read your very interesting writing today MV. Thank you for posting your poetry for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 10:21:00 AM
Keep playing. It's why we live. Tony
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