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Poetry: For the Words, Are All Around Me

The secret syllables and words surround me in a morning fog I absorb them through the places I wonder ideas I ponder they flow into my blood veins as they spill from my rose lips like shameless water they sweep into me like the wind behind my bare knees they whisper into my ears within the summers breeze they creep u on me like a bottle feeling emerged from being cloaked deep within the search for a pen and paper, feverishly begins into the depths of my soul the intensity is hard to control like a wave, the words tumble over me overwhelmingly grainy sands distort my messages vision as I struggle to write how I remembered the piece would begin it feels like a rush of electric creativity lightning bolts of wisdom jolt through my body shooting from me stories of grief, and struggles things I share to help others not to repeat of loss and love like a bottled sermon thrown from above the words hit me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/10/2010 1:42:00 PM
wow!! I love your free verse style,,not many can pull it off with such a flow,,Your words are awesome. I trully do pick up poetry by watching. And hearing imagine one view can create such a beautiful poe,, Or just one word all you need is a tittle ,, than the poet takes over,,,later,..p.d.
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Date: 7/10/2010 7:35:00 AM
Excellent.. u must enter this in the contest calling for Free Verse..by Catie Lindsey.. this is awesome Heather.. good luck if u enter it.. I have made sure I entered ALL the contests cause win or lose its the competition and spirit of it that is the fun on this site.. wonderful piece my friend. with luv..
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Date: 7/9/2010 10:52:00 PM
words come form every sight sounds feelings and memories, only some of us know how to pen it :D
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