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Pillage...And Peace

Upon a dead mound of rocks, Approached a man, a horse, With armored chest and visored face: Well-shielded all across. Looking back, he gestured motion Then there was a shout Of thundering voices in a parley-- Hark! A battle roust...!! On and on went blade and sword: Smote against smote; The same action was followed as if, The kill was conn'd by rote... Insane, the enemy on which they charged, Was forced to run amok; A blow here and a blow there, Death ceased those with less luck... All at once--all was shaken, All was left asunder; Disaster had struck this land of dread, Now all was left in plunder...: No more of the smiling parched faces, Covered in sandy gear; No more were there happy looks-- None happiness left to bear... They'd made a sudden chance On those men, women and kid; While none left to mourn askance-- The afterward's left placid... The dead were being searched for life: All alive left, were killed; The loot was being gathered up-- The gathering hands were skilled.. A subtle cry was then heard, And a hand was with hope raised; The General turned around that way, Scanned and sternly gazed... It was here that he came down-- The horse he did unmount; He neared the dying soldier's cry, Then plunged his sword in ground... A softer moan filled the air, As steel pierced a mesh; The bleeding heart bled some more, They'd met--Blood, Steel, Sand and Flesh...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/6/2014 12:50:00 PM
Well done, Akash. Great depiction of the Roman Legion. Congratulations on a great win!
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Date: 7/2/2014 1:44:00 AM
Its inspiring how in the last verse no words were exchanged, you let the deport speak for itself, very wise. I respect your vocabulary too Akash. J.A.B.
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Date: 7/1/2014 6:45:00 AM
Congrats on a great win, Akash! Last line is very clever! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/30/2014 10:30:00 PM
well done Akash, Linda
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Date: 11/14/2010 1:08:00 AM
could picture the scene, very descriptive
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Date: 11/2/2010 6:36:00 PM
i enjoyed it this morning,yadav.fabiyas
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Date: 10/29/2010 5:21:00 PM
ahhh a rennaisance man, please go to You Tube and listen to Martial Acts! and you will like Cameo Knights, & Above Desire as well! Light & Love (Loved your write too!)
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