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Peircing Silence, Screaming Thoughts...

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Peircing Silence, Screaming Thoughts...

Here in my room,
I lay in my bed,
With every thought of you,
Intruding my head,
Like snapshots in my brain,
Of the last thing you said,

My gut is violated,
And I twitch with rage,
I cannot free myself,
From this anxiety ridden cage,
And in this chapter of our life,
It seems I can't turn the page,

This torture is much worse,
Since you have been away,
I am so scared,
That away is where you'll stay,
And no matter how hard I try,
I will have to lay here in my room,
Alone one more day.




By Mac Holmes. Janettas grandson. 
Written sitting in my room alone still waiting...

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  1. Date: 11/23/2009 5:28:00 PM
    Interesting poem. Congratulations on your being featured this week. Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 3:43:00 PM
    Congrats on your feature write this week! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 11:19:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your poetry being shared with us this week >> James

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 8:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Janetta. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 6:39:00 AM
    Very dramatic featured poem that you have written. Hope that it is a topic and not actual pain that you are experiencing. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 2:58:00 AM
    Excellent write and well deserving selection for being featured this week. Best wishes and keep writing. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

  1. Date: 11/22/2009 6:02:00 PM
    The emotion and lonliness come through your words in a gripping way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen