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Peaches, Pineapples, and Pears

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Peaches, Pineapples, and Pears

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A Rondel
For LMB's contest

*Peaches, Pineapples, and Pears*

Peaches, pineapples and pears
chilled, topped over my angel food.
This helps to sweeten my sour mood,
this, my secret love affair.

I cut them into little squares
drain, contain, and later drink the juice.
Peaches, pineapples, and pears
chilled, topped over my angel food.

No other dessert can even compare
to this delicacy for me, not you.
I must satisfy my sweet tooth,
there won't be enough to share!!!
Peaches, pineapples, and pears...

Name withheld until contest is over

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  1. Date: 4/6/2011 11:11:00 AM
    It has been a pleasure to read your excellent poetry today Jared. Where are you these days? I hope to get back soon to read more. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 7:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's Dreamy Desserts contest Jared. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 6:48:00 AM
    A nice use of form..this was so, so...."fruity".. good one and congrats on your win. BG

  1. Date: 6/6/2010 3:12:00 PM
    Lovely food and great poem congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/6/2010 1:19:00 PM
    Congrats Jared on your winning poem in my contest with this yummy Rondel ...makes me want thankxxx for supporting my contest ..with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 5:15:00 PM
    sounds good, now I am wanting a little fruit!!

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 1:42:00 AM
    Sounds delicious but I think your a bit mean not wanting to share. :) :) good one Jarad....Margaret

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 8:04:00 PM
    I know that you love juicy fruits ...especially the juice....So this poem is wonderfully describing how much you love juicy fruits. Especially the ripe ones. You are a wonderful poet and this one goes to my fav...Scarlett

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 2:19:00 PM
    YOu sure are a healthy eater, Jared, even with desserts. Now Angelfood I love! It's one of the lowest caloric desserts you can find. I like to buy angel food made with splenda. But I still gotta have the frosting on it. Pineapple is a great fruit. Too bad I don't like many others, except for cherries berries and melons. Dried fruits like figs are nice! I think this was a very nice poem. It's ok, though, you don't have to share it with me. I'm across the way with cheesecake and icereams. hahaha

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 11:06:00 AM
    You sure have an admirably healthy diet. Well written, Jared, and I wish you success in Linda's contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 10:58:00 AM
    Hurray for Peaches, pineapples, and pears! Seductively healthy! Smiles and good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 6:45:00 PM
    A Yummy, fruity desserted poem you composed, dear Jared :) Good Luck in the contest. Thanks for your comment. All the very best, Iolanda

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 5:45:00 PM
    "A' with alliteration gives a fine tone and rhythm to the Rondel. Good luck in the contest