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Palm Of Your Hand

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Palm Of Your Hand

Let me walk the palm of your
hand, over the mount of Venus
down the line of life and along
the line of love.
Let our heart lines entwine and
mingle with the lines of fate.
Let our futures be each others
and the stars be radiant.
For in the heavens our love is
written, its glory for all to see,
it falls as stardust, in honour of
you and me.
So let us walk hand in hand and
let the lines entwine, live our
life in paradise, and taste of love 
sublime.
And at break of day let love
change its cloak and come in
the form of rays, to provoke
desire and passion throughout
our given days.




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  1. Date: 12/24/2010 1:27:00 PM
    What a romantic poem this one is!Liked it-kashinath

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 7:10:00 AM
    beautiful Daniel a poem of true love i enjoyed reading

  1. Date: 7/8/2010 4:10:00 PM
    Daniel..u are so missed.. hope all is well.. and u will return to us very soon.. your charming poetry is unlike any other on P.S. with luv..

  1. Date: 6/27/2010 1:45:00 AM
    How are you Daniel?hope fine!miss your poetry!C

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 1:38:00 PM
    Great write as always,Daniel...Very passionate...Sara

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 6:45:00 AM
    It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Daniel. Dang pc problems take your time just give us more poetry works good for me. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 10:40:00 PM
    Romantic as ever Daniel....... that palm of the hand which holds the lines to destiny... beautiful,original concept,,going to my favs..Charma

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 6:23:00 PM
    Nice journey on the mounts of the palm meaningful too

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 5:55:00 PM
    enjoyed, very nice

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 4:15:00 PM
    I like this one a lot, with the verse on palmistry. Very interesting and passionate.

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 3:44:00 PM
    Wish I could view love through your romantic eyes, Daniel. Such a beautiful poem -- clever use of the lines in the palm to reach the destination of eternal love. Best wishes, my friend. Love, Carolyn