Overheard - a Heavenly Conversation

"Well, Father, he has read the Bible 6 times. He Worships YOU : In Songs of Rhymes. Still now, slowly up Jacob's Ladder he climbs He has dreamt of writing the story of Heaven's Chimes" Every Tuesday, ( After a night of drinking Heaven's Wines ) From ten until two (Lunch included), Praise and Prayers -" Rhymes " To be Cont. (maybe) I have doubt in myself, as if I live a lie I pretent to be a POET, I'm sure YOU see that's a lie I have seen the Future; Yet I Live in the Past I am old and frail, GOD has shown me"Now,the Future, the Past" Ok, ( "Doubting Thomas" Harry ) - Should there be a Part 2, a Part 3?? Appreciate YOUR Comments LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/12/2012 6:25:00 AM

Hi there young man, I have taken a few minutes rest from trying to put things back together in the house. I have decided to start and read more of your work dear man and this is terrific . I don't know yet if there is a part 2 or 3 but there ought to be. xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/4/2012 2:20:00 AM

liege , a moving piece worth the read and the re-read.. how inspirational; thanks for sharing!.:) hugggs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/3/2012 9:02:00 PM

Daniel, I know how you feel... But, i will never let go of the dream of following and making my heart believe.. I AM WHAT I AM... and what i have indise will not let me go.. (A POET voice). and our hevenly father see's it as well... nice rhyming... love the *hevenly chimes* thought... always..PD