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One Symptom Of What Is Wrong.

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One Symptom Of What Is Wrong.

Who needs parades or who gets the wing?
We have no need for carols to sing.
For what matters today
is:" Get out of my way!"
as Black Friday and bargains are king.

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  1. Date: 12/5/2010 6:10:00 PM
    Hello, Gerard! Stopping by real quick to ask you to put the word ~sandcastle~ on your contest entry.. I'm still in the middle of judging. Sorry! I just noticed it right now. And i so love your entry. Hopefully you get my notice before i close contest. God bless* SKAT

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 4:47:00 PM
    lol, bargains are king, you bet, lol, sorry to hear about the shoves, excellent limerick:)

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 2:12:00 PM
    Many congratulations on your win Gerard with this witty Limerick, in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 12:00:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Gerard! Soup Mail. Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 5:25:00 AM
    Congratulations Gerard on your win in the "Commercialized Holiday Humor" contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 9:24:00 PM
    That is about it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 4:19:00 PM
    Good job, Gerard. YOu got it right!! And congratulations on your winning poem! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 4:10:00 PM
    seems about right Gerard! Nailed it in very few words. Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 2:08:00 PM
    Congratulations on this win for the excellent entry to the contest, Gerard

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 12:35:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 10:09:00 AM
    Get out of my way!" as Black Friday and bargains are king. "Yep, Wrong King, True Love is forgotten!" "Congratulations" on a worthy poem's recognition! Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 8:56:00 AM
    You limericked it right out of the park with this one, Gerald. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 7:06:00 AM
    Excellent poem, Gerard! "Get out of my way" is being heard a lot during the Christmas rush. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 1:03:00 PM
    Very humorous and witty write you have penned, Gerard

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 4:50:00 PM
    :) Thanks for supporting the contest, Gerard! Love, Carolyn