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One-Sided Mirror

I'm staring at you through tinted glass you can't see me through this glass on your side all you see is you ironically, it's all my side sees too i watch as you turn to the mirror beside re-apply makeup, true nature you hide you are someone you weren't meant to be I can see you but you can't see me you look into my eyes but see your own all I want is to bring you home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/11/2011 4:19:00 PM
heyyyy nice poem girrrrrlllll!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 12/10/2011 9:54:00 AM
wow very deep i like it i dont know what u won but congrats :) keep righting!!!
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Date: 12/7/2011 4:54:00 PM
Awesome, i am trying to think if its self analysis or like Carrie says, about a relationship with someone else. In any event,Great poem and congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/7/2011 8:58:00 AM
Well done, this could be a poem written about numerous relationships. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/7/2011 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's "Mirror" contest J. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2011 1:13:00 AM
Yep! like this.Congrats on your win x
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Date: 12/6/2011 9:53:00 PM
Excellent perspective! Makeup does sometimes hide a truer beauty. May you soon return to the winner's circle! RAY
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Date: 12/6/2011 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations on this insightful write, Miss Dover. A worthy win for Matt's contest. I love the 2nd stanza the most. ;) Gwendolen
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:21:00 PM
Congrats on 3rd place in my mirror contest! Love the last line.
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Date: 11/20/2011 2:48:00 PM
go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet
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