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One rock...

One rock drops.
Many ripples
spread across the river.

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  1. Date: 10/30/2010 9:35:00 AM
    Dropped by The Soup today and wanted to read one of your poems. So much said in just three lines. Hope when you get time, you take up your pen and write again. I like the use of alliteration. Blessings to you in all your endeavors. Mom

  1. Date: 9/27/2009 1:00:00 PM
    Nicely done Haiku. It is interesting to see the motion or sound waves in the water. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/4/2009 10:10:00 AM
    You've said a lot here with just a few words. Beautifully done, Shannon. Been awhile since you've posted here at the Soup ... hope you return soon with more wonderful writing!

  1. Date: 8/26/2009 6:48:00 AM
    Beautiful Haiku. I see the ripples. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 12:00:00 PM
    So much depth in just three lines. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comments on my footle series. Keep on writing!!!! Mom

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 8:17:00 AM
    Well done haiku!! Can see the circles forming!!

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 2:01:00 AM
    I can see that concentric group of waves expanding, moving, growing to finally disappear in the river....Excellent picture, Shannon! "One Rock"? You Rock!! Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 12:52:00 AM
    Great picture Shannon.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 8:43:00 PM
    Nice Haiku, makes the reader see and feel the rock in the water, good work. Keep on writing. Judy Riley

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 8:35:00 PM
    Oh the beauty of nature, a wonderful imagery. Yeah, the river gets ripples when any hard substance drops into it. Great intelligent piece! Please keep writing...sharing your thoughts with us .Adeleke

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 7:03:00 PM
    Shannon, this beauty goes in my favs!!! essence of purity! my favorite style of writing! but I don't do it this good...your friend, jimbo