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On Thursday, Can Take a Hike

On Thursday, Can Take a Hike About parts of my poem are deep in doubt So what we should is try to work them out Or maybe for a long time it has now been And writing poetry should start over again. My poems may often receive a wise crack While others say I have a natural knack For writing poems which you will enjoy Which people prefer like a favorite toy. God in each poem will always enter scene; We will try to describe what He may mean And if for something like this you are thirsty Could have it a church every other Thursday. Poems will become perfect and prestigious And could turn into songs which are religious About Jesus Son of God who many do say He will return to see us again someday. So you should not go into a state of denial But try to think about it for a short while; If this sounds like something you will like To church every other Thursday can take a hike. jthorn5656@atmc.net

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Date: 7/30/2013 1:02:00 AM
Loved the central theme and the flow as always my friend.Just stopping by to say hello and to read up on your new stuff.I haven't been around lately but I posted alot since the last time you commented.
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