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old graveyard sinking

old graveyard sinking in late autumn, draped by tangerine leaves

Monoku Form or Free Verse, Broken Wings
7 Dec 2013

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  1. Date: 3/15/2014 10:08:00 AM
    I like the monoku....SKAT

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 3:10:00 PM
    great imagery.//congrats on win.//paul

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 1:04:00 AM
    Great imagery and outstanding win Nette!

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 11:17:00 PM
    a great poet with a well-deserved win. Congrats friend Nette :) It's our sem break already and I have more time reading poems here on PS. Have a blessed day always..mwuah!!! :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:30:00 PM
    I can picture a late autumn sun setting over this scene, love those tangerine leaves! congrats on your 1st place win :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:00:00 PM
    I thought it would be scarey but it was actualy quite beautiful.

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:58:00 PM
    this is utterly gorgeous imagery inside one short line. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:38:00 PM
    - One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:16:00 PM
    Wow!!! Way to go..SK

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 3:40:00 PM
    i wish i could have a name like, "nette" ...too awesome poet, a treasure, a light, and all the beauties she owns... Congratulations, my highness!! ^__^

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 2:56:00 PM
    Draped by tangerine leaves........I cannot tell you how many times, I would love to 'borrow' one of your beautiful descriptions for my own!! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 2:45:00 PM
    Congratulations on first place in my contest, sorry for the long delay in judging, I have had some eyesight problems. Constance

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 8:46:00 PM
    Stimulating vision here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 9:19:00 PM
    a real beauty!!!

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 7:51:00 PM
    I don't really understand Minoku, but this certainly awakens wonderful feelings, especially so when considering such paucity of verbiage.

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 5:22:00 PM
    Sometimes, the brighter side of nature can brighten even our gloomiest mood. I love the imagery in this poem! Terrific work, Nette!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. It really does mean a lot to me! :)

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 2:53:00 PM
    Dis looks like a winner monoku, tel me when u win. D contrasting visuals is great to read. Fond n Mery Xmas nette.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 12:51:00 AM
    Excellent. Great image of work. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 11:54:00 PM
    The image I get from this write is truly striking my friend! I surely loved reading this tremendous poem this evening! You have pleased my senses with this delightful piece, the eye appeal is astounding Nette! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:19:00 PM
    Image of bright, autumn leaves on a grave provides a deep contrast.Really works for me!