Next Time, Get the Details

His sister was getting married.
We decided that we should go.
I hadn't met his family yet
but I heard they could put on a show.

We checked our bags at the airport,
flew overnight to get there.
Of course our luggage took a different flight
off to God-knows-where.

So we dropped a large wad of cash
at some trendy local boutique.
There I picked out a stunning outfit,
something I found unique.

Off to the wedding in a rush,
there was no way we were getting there late.
We arrived at his parents home
looking like each other's prom date.

His mother smiled uncertainly
as she ushered us inside.
Sitting at the kitchen table
in jeans and boots was the bride.

Someone neglected to tell us
this was a casual, casual affair
and while I was dressed to the nines
the bride had pigtails in her hair.

The backyard was a sea of denim
and cowboy hats and boots.
I, in my silk and hubby in his tux,
when we walked out received some hoots.

It didn't look like a wedding venue,
it looked more like a rodeo.
I could have died of embarrassment
when I realized ... we were the show.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/2/2012 8:59:00 PM
Oh, but what a show. I can just imagine, did you ever get your luggage back? Had the same thing happen to me in Victoria, I ended up wearing bluejeans in front of 500 physicians when accepting an award... classy! Well done. Congrats on this win. Lee
Login to Reply
Date: 10/2/2012 2:32:00 PM
Francine, Congratulations with your fantastic entry for Joann's "My Cousin's Wedding" cheers~ xox~ PD
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2012 6:07:00 PM
Funny tale.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2012 3:05:00 PM
oops, I just noticed that she gave multiple placements at just the three levels. Still, for me it's a real laugh!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2012 3:03:00 PM
wow, this one is one of the BEST . Surprised you did not place higher with it!!! VERY good job and congrats.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2012 7:30:00 AM
What a super win for you. Congratulations Francine. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 9/30/2012 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Francine , nice one and embarrasing xx
Login to Reply
Date: 9/8/2012 3:21:00 AM
yep i can see how it seemed you were out of place, love the cowboy boots n denim places , around the rodeo...xox
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2012 6:07:00 PM
funny,flows smoothly,rhymes tight,great write Francine
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2012 9:11:00 PM
so funny so awesome i could read this over and over thank you
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2012 3:23:00 PM
Loved this humorous little tale, Francine! Great big hugs, Jack
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2012 9:48:00 AM
clever and funny, too! nice one!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2012 6:48:00 AM
lol quite the adventure you had its really thrilling poem . enjoyed this . *smiles* Ron
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2012 8:33:00 PM
hahaha, Francine. Can you imagine I read this three times and laughed louder each time? What a hoot!!! Loved it, loved it, loved it. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2012 7:06:00 PM
Did this really happen? Reading this reminded me of the pilot episode of the TV show "Bewitched". Darrin and Samantha experienced something familiar to your episode.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2012 5:52:00 PM
This is such a cute write Francine! I really enjoyed this wedding tale! Hope it wasn't true! Fabulous piece, Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter