Need Help With the Title. . Any Suggestions??

The sun rises and sets to show me I'm still standing
The birds fly then rest, get back up again to show me 
Although life is hard I gotta keep moving
Flower bloom, refreshes the world, showin me there can be happy ending
Although they die and I cry I prepare for there warm return 
My heart still cries, the pain I still hide
But,
I wake up with a smile on my face
No matter what happenes 
I'mma live my life to the fullest,
Tuck away, but always remember the mistakes I make
Carry them around and make the second time around the right way. . . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 8/5/2009 4:25:00 PM
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Date: 4/3/2009 9:10:00 AM
A very uplifting piece, I'm not very good at titles either but maybe "The Second time around"? I don't know but really liked how positive this was. Great writing! Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 4/3/2009 4:23:00 AM
Second time is what I would call this poem ...Blessings
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Date: 4/3/2009 3:06:00 AM
This is quite beautiful and rich in imagery. Perhaps "The Quest for Happy Endings"?
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Date: 4/2/2009 11:17:00 PM
I am not very goodat titles myself but this one is about standing tall, living life to the fullest, and second chances... maybe something along those lines. You express emotion very clearly in your writing. Maybe you should just call this one "Happy Endings" because that is what all of the previous things will get you. Great writing. good luck in your title search. Smiles from Lolita
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