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Nature's Fury-2

Nature’s fury a) Tsunami Synonym of death Tsunami In sea’s lexicon. Form: LUNE (5-3-5,unrhymed) b) Thunderbolt Sparkler in sky Lovely. But, is it for a bad Cracker close by. Form: Trillinea O (4-8-4, L1&L3 rhymed) c) Crimson Light Fire or brimstone burning? The smile of whore Or hell’s ire? Dusk or night, is it bloody The last? Form: Dixdeux O (10-10-2 ) PS: Based on the three given pics. S.Jagathsimhan Nair, 10 Jun 2013. For Debbie’s contest.

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/12/2013 1:06:00 PM

very clever Jag xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/12/2013 12:19:00 PM

yes to your win, jag.. congrats!.:) huggs

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/11/2013 7:10:00 PM

Colorful writing, showing a great desire to grow, the punctuation and capitalization bothered me, and is not current. The Trillinea required the use of the word ROSE. Keep up the good work! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/11/2013 5:39:00 PM

EXTREMELY well written in very challenging and difficult forms, Jag...Liked the Dixdeux particularly...Congratulations - Tim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/11/2013 11:45:00 AM

an explosive piece so well scribed, jag... love the last verse; it completes the whole picture with a whip!..:) all the best, my friend..:) huggs

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 6/10/2013 4:51:00 PM

intriguing trio of poems you have here jaggy, unusual wording, I like them a lot (especially the first one) they should do well in debbie's contest :)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/10/2013 2:58:00 PM

Splendid combination... good luck in the contest... Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/10/2013 10:08:00 AM

- Proficient and well written Jag. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)