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Nature's fury-2

             Nature’s fury

a)	Tsunami

Synonym of death
In sea’s lexicon.

Form: LUNE (5-3-5,unrhymed)

b)	Thunderbolt

Sparkler in sky
Lovely. But, is it for a bad
Cracker close by.

Form: Trillinea O (4-8-4, L1&L3 rhymed)

c)	Crimson Light
Fire or brimstone burning? The smile of whore
Or hell’s ire? Dusk or night, is it bloody
The last?
 Form: Dixdeux O (10-10-2 )

             PS: Based on the three given pics.
             S.Jagathsimhan Nair, 10 Jun 2013.
             For Debbie’s contest.

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  1. Date: 6/12/2013 1:06:00 PM
    very clever Jag xx

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 12:19:00 PM
    yes to your win, jag.. congrats!.:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 7:10:00 PM
    Colorful writing, showing a great desire to grow, the punctuation and capitalization bothered me, and is not current. The Trillinea required the use of the word ROSE. Keep up the good work! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 5:39:00 PM
    EXTREMELY well written in very challenging and difficult forms, Jag...Liked the Dixdeux particularly...Congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 11:45:00 AM
    an explosive piece so well scribed, jag... love the last verse; it completes the whole picture with a whip!..:) all the best, my friend..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 4:51:00 PM
    intriguing trio of poems you have here jaggy, unusual wording, I like them a lot (especially the first one) they should do well in debbie's contest :)

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Splendid combination... good luck in the contest... Terry

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 10:08:00 AM
    - Proficient and well written Jag. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)