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Naked, Shivering

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Naked, Shivering

there… solitary
on the street corner she stands
naked, shivering

Note:  Sorry, but there's no mystery here.  There is a little oak tree on the street corner (I've taken photos of her since her leaves began to change colors).  Then two days ago after a long, cold rain, all her leaves were gone!

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  1. Date: 3/27/2014 9:47:00 PM
    Excellent personification here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 3/17/2014 11:32:00 AM
    enjoyed this beauty again - I can so imagine the little tree. Will email tonight, my dear friend. Will say extra prayers for you - I know you'll be OK xx

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 11:17:00 AM
    Dear Annalise I loved it! I guess evergreens are the only trees that don't streak in Winter lol chuck

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 3:34:00 PM
    enjoying this lovely one about the little tree again x

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 10:03:00 AM
    o i c.. about a tree.. hahhaha.. a great one.. naked and shivering :) i hope nobody have ever been in this kind situation.. ;)

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 2:13:00 PM
    awww, your little tree lost all its leaves - I didn't get the attached pic of the tree you emailed, by the way, my friend

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 6:39:00 AM
    Excellent. Well crafted haiku. Tfs

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 3:31:00 PM
    oh, sad write here, Annalise - very powerful in 3 lines. Hope you're having a wonderful week x

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Great work yet again. I like how it could be interpreted so many ways. Nice to see you and thanks so much for that gorgeous review on my latest're so kind. :)

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 7:05:00 AM
    mysterious and beautiful, annalise.. glad to see you around again... greeat 'ku!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 9:48:00 PM
    Hello Anne, wondering about the street corner imagery.... enjoyed...LINDA

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 9:01:00 PM
    Several images came to mind. A very well crafted Haiku :)