Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

My Unique Line - RD

Ray Dillard Avatar Ray Dillard - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled My Unique Line - RD which was written by poet Ray Dillard. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Ray Dillard

Best Ray Dillard Poems

+ Fav Poet

My Unique Line - RD

"Petal nor thorn could save this rose."

From "Flowers...Beautiful Flowers"  
This line personifies the loss of life and the harvest of flowers  (roses) for a funeral.  Just as loved ones are lost each day in the prime of life (any time really), the rose is taken in the height of beauty and placed atop the grave.  This is in spite of the thorns which protect it.  We possess the attributes of the rose as well.  Yet, still we pass, regardless of benevolence or wickedness.

Copyright © Ray Dillard

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:47:00 PM
    Ray, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 1:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Impressive Line"contest Ray. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 10:35:00 PM
    RAY ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 9:09:00 PM
    I also loved your stunning explanation as well as the poem's line. Congrats on this. I adore personification!

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 6:43:00 PM
    Wow, Ray, this is a wonderful line, and seems as if from a classic of old. (I would have placed this much much higher in the contest! Nice to see your work again!

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 6:09:00 PM
    Congrats Ray on a wonderful win with this unique line luv..