Get Your Premium Membership

My Time With U

After my time with you last night I never want to forget that moment, I hope you will never forget me Everything I ever wanted last night happened Someone caring about me, you took me out on a date and did not care when we left each others side I just hope that you are not just another one of those guys who acts all sweet on that one night then call it off because you got what you wanted Now I hope you miss me as much as I miss you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/21/2010 11:09:00 AM
well i cant say that was your best write, but it was interesting. Now i am not trying to get you upset k? i am just going to give you some little sugestions. k well i think that you should try writing something not about love for once. like maybe write about friendship or write about sisters or family or father daughter moments. i think you should try to write more poems about what goes on in your life. like if dad gets you lost in madison. maybe write about more stuff like that. Giggles
Login to Reply
Date: 6/20/2010 1:24:00 PM
Sweet poem Heather, thank you so much for your kind comments. And Heather is a lovely Scottish name >> James
Login to Reply
Date: 3/29/2010 11:01:00 AM
for your sake i hope so too sweetie. nice poem, always, rain
Login to Reply
Date: 3/27/2010 6:49:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... so enjoyed reading your creative write.. luv is truly grand indeed..luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/27/2010 6:30:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Heather. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 3/26/2010 2:01:00 PM
how sweet sounds like some night good luck and welcome to poetry soup faleshia
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs