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My time with u

After my time with you last night I 
never want to 
forget that moment, I hope you 
will never 
forget me 
Everything I ever wanted last 
night happened
Someone caring about me, you 
took me out on a date and did not 
care when we left each others side 
I just hope that you are not just 
another one of those guys who 
acts all sweet 
on that one night then call it off 
because you got what you wanted 
Now I hope you miss me as much 
as I miss you

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  1. Date: 6/21/2010 11:09:00 AM
    well i cant say that was your best write, but it was interesting. Now i am not trying to get you upset k? i am just going to give you some little sugestions. k well i think that you should try writing something not about love for once. like maybe write about friendship or write about sisters or family or father daughter moments. i think you should try to write more poems about what goes on in your life. like if dad gets you lost in madison. maybe write about more stuff like that. Giggles

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 1:24:00 PM
    Sweet poem Heather, thank you so much for your kind comments. And Heather is a lovely Scottish name >> James

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 11:01:00 AM
    for your sake i hope so too sweetie. nice poem, always, rain

  1. Date: 3/27/2010 6:49:00 AM
    Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... so enjoyed reading your creative write.. luv is truly grand indeed..luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.

  1. Date: 3/27/2010 6:30:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Heather. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 2:01:00 PM
    how sweet sounds like some night good luck and welcome to poetry soup faleshia