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My Sister and Other Creepy Things by Kooper (5th grade student)

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My Sister and Other Creepy Things by Kooper (5th grade student)

As I sat in my room on a stormy night,
something startled me with such a fright!

Through a crack in the door of my private domain, 
came a screech as high-pitched as brakes on a train. 

I caught a glimpse of a reflection in my closet door mirror,
I saw it approaching as my spine tingled with fear!

My mind started to race...
WHO or WHAT has invaded my space?
In the reflection I dare to see-
a clump of hair like the hive of a bee.

Then, oh no, nails...
followed by scales! 

Footsteps were approaching as I let out a scream,
I wanted to run, hoping it was all a dream. 

My door creaked open, I chewed my nails down to stubs.
Fingers wrapped around the edge of my door like wriggling grubs! 

The door flew open, and who should appear...?
My SISTER in a Hannah Montana costume, headphone in ear.
With her puffy blind wig, pointed heels and gloved hands,
I don't know what's scarier- a monster or a Hannah Montana fan.

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  1. Date: 11/14/2010 1:32:00 AM
    very amusing!

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 7:29:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Andrea. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/27/2010 8:36:00 PM
    cute Halloween themed poem, really enjoyed it

  1. Date: 10/27/2010 8:16:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup... hope u enjoy the site and share your poetry with us .. this one is pretty neat luv.. keep creating ..

  1. Date: 10/27/2010 8:04:00 PM
    Good Hallowe'en poem here, filled with tight rhymes. Indeed, what is scarier? A monster or a Hannah Montana fan?~Chris