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My Last Night

I pushed on the walls of an unlawful community as hard as i (I) could and so, i (I) brought it on myself I made sin turn into lyrics and show a dim light on family who control us all word on paper taken words from a over mental, impoverished broken mind you know the words of truth and sin like things that could be seen from out the dirt window things that happen to the poor things that go killing in the night and sometimes in the day you are reading the soul of me and you feel helpless to help me fear not one tear for me for what has happen can not bring me back only true will, in others will be the light to stop the darkness of unsavory men of refine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/21/2010 7:14:00 AM
Verlecia, what a deep thought provoking write.
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Date: 11/21/2010 6:27:00 AM
Your writing is to the point of sadness and pain, but I do sense a smile in there ...Glad you enjoyed my "Dangerous Ride" love comparing weather to past relationships.. always Michael
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Date: 11/17/2010 12:45:00 AM
Verlecia, this is adeep emotion one can feel,, very deep words and a painful thought,, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 11/17/2010 12:37:00 AM
so glad to have read you today,veriecia.. your soulful piece stuns me.. thanks for this one! warmest, nette
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