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Island of Fantasy

There is a place I long to be…. A fervent wish......I often see Where I can close the book, take a breath Close my eyes….and remember……...............me.... ~ Where once again….I will find myself…. my forgotten self, along the sea… There is a beach of pure white sand An island in a far-off strand Where I shall walk with happy feet Where tall palms overhead will meet Where green and scarlet birds will fly Beneath a golden tropic sky There is a spring, whose waters flow Along a creek bed cold as snow That I shall drink with eagerness With taste of mint and watercress To quench a thirst that I have known Within my very flesh and bone I have a world in which to roam A tree a thousand miles from home That I have never even seen And yet I know it's branches green Will give me shade some happy day Beside a lake long miles away My wish foretells a longing fate And so I'll bide my time and wait ~ There is a place I long to be…. Where I can close the book, take a breath Close my eyes….and remember…… me….. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- For Contest: Island of Fantasy Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/11/2014 7:25:00 PM
So true, there are few places to be oneself and they are precious. Congrad's on your Light & Love
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Date: 3/10/2014 9:10:00 PM
A beautiful and serene inner sanctuary you describe...may you always find peace there. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:06:00 PM
A brilliant write Carrie. The "Island of me", we should all find a place like this within. I love " taste of mint and watercress to quench a thirst that I have known within" wonderfully written. Congratulations on your well deserved win - Connie
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Date: 3/10/2014 12:57:00 PM
Ah such lovely thoughts about a lovely place! Congrats on your win Carrie !
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Date: 3/10/2014 11:30:00 AM
Ah yes, the paradise in my mind. I hope, someday, you find your island and there, find yourself. Beautiful poem, beautiful thoughts. Joe
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Date: 3/10/2014 10:34:00 AM
Such a beauty should manifest... I enjoyed my visit Carrie and congratulations on the win... Verlena
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Date: 3/10/2014 10:13:00 AM
Carrie. What a truly beautiful poem. Your are deservedly number one and I am happy to add this to my favs. CTB
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Date: 3/10/2014 7:52:00 AM
Very well done!
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Date: 3/10/2014 7:24:00 AM
One of my very favorites from you...well done my dear. BG
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Date: 3/10/2014 6:38:00 AM
superb Carrie big congrats on win hugs
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Date: 6/25/2013 7:20:00 AM
Carrie congratulation on this superb win. Connie
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Date: 6/24/2013 12:36:00 AM
Stunning poem. Congrats on the win :)
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Date: 6/23/2013 5:46:00 PM
Its an honor to be placed next to you.Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 6/23/2013 11:08:00 AM
Carrie, my appreciation of your mastery of our craft just grows and grows. This entry far outclasses anything in the list of winners. Congratulations.... Jake
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Date: 6/23/2013 12:22:00 AM
well, here I am two years later and saying again. Congratulations on your well deserved win!! Top of the list!
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Date: 6/22/2013 9:54:00 PM
Carrie, your poem was perfect. Thank you very much :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win~ LOVE~ SKAT.
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Date: 10/24/2011 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Bell, Book, and Candle" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2011 9:45:00 PM
gosh, another stunning one. I can't believe I got my silliness placed so high next to ones like yours and Nette's. Simply outstanding work, Carrie. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/23/2011 9:45:00 PM
But I'm not complaining! Just want you to know how much I loved yours!
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Date: 10/23/2011 8:15:00 PM
I love the flow and the content of this excellent work Carrie. Your beginning and ending tie it all together beautifully. Well done in the contest... cheers Margaret
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Date: 10/23/2011 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your lovely poem and great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/23/2011 6:05:00 PM
Beautiful aspiration Carrie, Worthy of all honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/23/2011 5:39:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on sweet success in my contest with this dazzling delight luv...
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Date: 10/8/2011 4:09:00 PM
superb........... hmm i am almost short of words.......... cool.. there is a saying that goes this way"if wishes where horses,beggars would ride on them"..we need to walk towards our dreams to make them a reality......
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Date: 10/8/2011 2:08:00 PM
You are always a remembered smile
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