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My First Child

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My First Child

A precious gift! Joy unimagined fills my heart She smiles! My heart races, leaping! And like a butterfly in spring, gliding, It dips among new blossoms Like a sweet melody playing softly in the cool of the evening, I soar! My baby, my first, like an angel sleeps Soft, warm and brown I stare in awe of this most perfect gift from God! Tiny almond-shaped eyes, sparkle- searching Nothing as beautiful have I ever seen! She cries and her teardrops like crystal daggers Pierce, my joyful heart! And like a wounded sparrow it plummets Free-falling, and I am left puzzled...confused Nervous, I gently hold her close to my breast I am sure she can feel my heart beating.. Suddenly our faces brush... she turns- Our eyes lock, and smiles ripple! My first born--all is well in my world.
© 1992 ~*~

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  1. Date: 2/3/2014 9:37:00 AM
    looking for an oldie, and found a beau't amazing poetry Annalise....

  1. Date: 6/28/2010 9:39:00 AM
    Congratulations Audrey on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/26/2010 8:34:00 PM
    Super smiles as I read this dear Audrey :) I can definitely feel the love that you have for your daughter :) --congrats on your win with this touching piece and thank you so much for your comments about the poem for my brother-- hugs to you--thank you---nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/23/2010 2:50:00 AM
    Awesome write and a touching ending- simply beautiful Audrey- Congrats sweetie

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 8:02:00 PM
    this is so darling, Audrey. A wonderful write. Congrats on your hm. LUv, andrea ps I also wrote a poem about my first, Angela and used the butterfly metaphor!

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 2:37:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 2:23:00 AM
    Awesome Poem Audrey!!! Congratulations dear on your win. I miss hearing from you but completely understand the "busy" part of life. 2 weeks and he ships out. I'm actually going to miss him. Things have been so much better. Email when you have a chance so we can catch up! Keep writing. Love, Kelly

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 11:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time" Audrey. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 5:58:00 PM
    How welll I remember that first. You have described the feeling well. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 3:12:00 PM
    Congrats Audrey on your HM in Joes contest with this wonderful write.. babies are the best .. it was in my entry too.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" ...enjoy your honor BBF...

  1. Date: 4/30/2010 8:12:00 AM
    Hi, I tried sending a soup mail but it did not work, what I need to tell you is that in your entry for my contest, In Search of, your poem, I think has a spelling error in the first line, I think you meant stale not stage, but maybe you did mean stage. I am judging the contest, hopefuly finish tomorrow, Saturday, I love your poem, but cannot place it with a spelling error, confirm that you did mean stage or correct it Please contact me to let me know..... love constance

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 4:53:00 AM
    My first is 40 and my little girl is 26. Children are one of many blessings we see in a lifetime, probably the most precious. Vince

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 11:35:00 AM
    Great poem and so sweet and special congratulations on a well deserved feature

  1. Date: 1/21/2010 2:14:00 AM
    Wow! A beauttiful Ballad worthy to be featured. Congrats. Ernilando

  1. Date: 1/20/2010 12:42:00 PM
    Many congrats on your beautiful piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 1/19/2010 8:42:00 PM
    Audrey, You never forget the happiness that first born infant brings into your life and it is as easy to write about when they are grown as it is when they have just arrived; there is nothing like it. Your poem conveys this beautifully! Congratulations on your poem being featured. Blessings, Connie

  1. Date: 1/19/2010 7:23:00 PM
    This is a wonderful piece, congrats on your well deserved feature. keep writing. Your poetry friend Adeleke

  1. Date: 1/19/2010 6:01:00 AM
    I can imagine nothing brings a woman closer to God than that look at her "first-born." Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/19/2010 2:16:00 AM
    Dear Audrey, Congratulations on this beautiful hear-touching poem being a feature of the week, and thank you for sharing your poetic talent once again. Love,LAINIE.

  1. Date: 1/18/2010 12:50:00 PM
    Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Audrey >> James