My Brother, My Blood My Grief

Today, my heart heaves a heavy weight
Why, O! Why?
The soul crushing goodbye
Fervently I pray,
To see you just one more day
We part ways knowing it not our last
Looking ahead, thinking of our next
But Death, too grotesque, had other plans;
My burden to bear!
Why this painful news,
Only God knows
Someone please!
Wake me from this dream
A cold, unfathomable abyss
That I never want to revisit
We bow our head in sadness
And bury our faces in distress
My heart full of pain resonates its tears
If only, If only
We could haggle out of our demise
Gone too soon
The sheer disbelief
 
The promises you vowed to keep
Goals to reach before you finally sleep
You may be no more but not in my mind
Still here with me
If only I can see
A staked heart, resounding unbound tears
Forget you not; to miss you a lot
Lost souls, forgotten families
Never to me
 
Good tales we've heard
From generations long and dead
The happy ending cliche
For your soul, I pray
Here our fate! separated by worlds
While I wait
For the powers that be, to bide us again one day
But more, for in mere simplicity
I will never say goodbye
Forever with me, 
My brother, my blood

                                                                          In Loving Memory of our Lost Souls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/14/2016 5:19:00 AM
so sad....
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 1/14/2016 1:22:00 PM
Thanks, LL
Date: 3/21/2015 9:47:00 AM
Yeah man, life has it's own ways to rob us our loved ones. They gone but not forgotten
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 3/21/2015 10:04:00 AM
So true man...... Thanks
Date: 9/24/2013 5:29:00 AM
So sad and sorrowful. Death is really inevitable. Tim Paker
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 12/15/2015 8:04:00 PM
True, Tim.... Decided to paint a memory for all lost ones... Soulfully
Date: 9/23/2013 8:30:00 AM
Soulful, sad but for always!
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 10/14/2013 3:50:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 9/17/2013 1:46:00 PM
a very good poem of respect here wilfred your brother i am sure is around feeling this all the best tina x
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 12/15/2015 8:04:00 PM
Thank you , Tina .... I pray so too!
Date: 9/11/2013 8:53:00 PM
I can feel your pain in these words. It is not easy to lose someone especially your blood. just think that now he is in a better place. If you have time - you might want to check out ( For The ones I Love ) Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 9/13/2013 6:33:00 AM
Thanks for ur kind words. I really liked our poem too! It softens angry souls.......Thank you!!!!!!!!!! U r blessed!!!
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