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Mrs Jasmine Garland Seller

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Mrs Jasmine Garland Seller

A female tongue pushed me down from the swing of sleep.
Rain kids roused the stink of railway track in the dawn.
His liquor reddened half opened eyes gaze
At the life-like-fan, its rotation makes him dizzy.
His sweet brown lady drags him into the duties.

A long chain of complaints tinkles on her lips.
Worries about her female children at home
Rise up like the black smoke from the train.
She tries to put white smelling jasmine garlands nicely
In her basket that does rest on the floor of the compartment.

Baskets never enjoy the  fragrance, but only carry............


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  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:18:00 PM
    Love the title, Fabiyas. Great write.

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 10:06:00 PM
    FAB,,NICE TO SEE YOU, still congratulating all my sisters past contest. . Now I'm on the poets favorite poem contest.. I'm actually amazed with all these poems. I see why they are chosen as a favorite poem by other poets...a Super Congratulations here. I think I agreed with all the winners in this contest... love~PD

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:08:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in SKAT's "Members Favorite Poem" contest Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 4:59:00 AM
    FABIYAS a belated congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 7:22:00 PM
    Congrats, Fabiyas. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 8:03:00 PM
    LOts of interesting images in this poem, Fabiyas. I especially liked "complaints tinkle on her lips" and "rise up like the black smoke from the train." and I see this was a winner in the "women" contest. Belated congrats to you.

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 11:13:00 AM
    A tough life, Fabiyas, but Mrs Jasmine Garland Seller is doing her best to brighten things up. Enjoyed so much. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 12:24:00 AM
    What a wonderful poem! Intense imagery through very well written lines, Fabiyas! Beautiful! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 11:26:00 AM
    FABIAS congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 12:49:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in the "Tell us of Women" contest Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 8:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Fabiyas. Well written

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 2:01:00 AM
    Big Congratulations to you,Fabiyas..Beautiful piece and nice imagery....

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 12:29:00 AM
    Fabiyas, this is truly an amazing poem...the imagery is wonderful, how you draw the reader in...and then that last line...very powerful message conveyed. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 9:26:00 PM
    hey, I see you placed high in Brian's contest with your poem. Big congrats, Fabiyas. you did GREAT.

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 3:47:00 PM
    a winning poem easy to spot Fabiyas and u have a great gift to convey stunning scenes with words luv.. visiting PS today so check out my latest poem luv..

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 3:10:00 AM
    I can just imagine this life like scene! Great depiction! Congrats on your well deserved win! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:56:00 PM
    love the hanging flow in the end.. congrats on your cherished win, fabiyas!.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:09:00 AM
    Amzing poetry by you Fabiyas!Congrats on your win in the contest.

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 8:26:00 AM
    Each incredible line, is worth reading more than once. Indeed a winner, and one of the best I've seen! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 7:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 174" Fab. Love, Carol

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