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MOODY, MOODY BLUE

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MOODY, MOODY BLUE


Flurries bite as the raven drools
it sits on frosted boughs and trills.
Amid the numb of winter’s limbs
its call, the threadbare air, refills.

My eyes mirror the lone hill’s song
while breaths cry out to agonize.
Deep within a moonless backdrop
phases of blue cause dullness to rise.

Prickly snow defrocks my gladness
Embedding stains on bleak frontier.
Oh torch of light, kindle the pyre
to awaken mood quite sullen here!


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Winter Blues Contest of Juli-Michelle
by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 1/21/2014 9:19:00 AM
    Interesting write on winter's blues and congrats on the win, nette

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 6:50:00 PM
    Nette....are you just perfect in everything? I think you are! Nice...beautiful..talented...awesome...I'm awed again...:-) :-) :-)

  1. Date: 1/2/2014 6:38:00 PM
    Rather sad, and melancholy, but wonderful as always !! I hope the blue turns to gold :)

  1. Date: 1/2/2014 3:20:00 PM
    Looks like a contender for the contest. Great descriptiveness and rhyming.

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 4:58:00 PM
    oooh, love how you turned snow prickly! yes, it can be such a depressing season and I love the title of this, reminding me of that rock band from the 70's . VEry nice contest entry.

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 2:13:00 PM
    awesome write, Nette

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 12:05:00 PM
    Nette blue? Never, dropping in to wish you a Happy New Year, may you prosper in you're writing and all that you endeavor, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 10:12:00 AM
    I missed perusing your extremely talented work. Very well penned Nette. Wishing you a happy new year my friend.

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 7:26:00 AM
    - Nette, this is first class - A masterpiece!! - HAPPY 2014!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 9:02:00 PM
    I forgot to mention, I want to wish you and yours a very Happy New Year my friend! Enjoy the beginning of the new year! (But I do suspect that you have already entered the new year when you get this, but still I want to wish you a good New Year!)

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 8:59:00 PM
    I am fascinated by what you have bestowed upon me and my soul by this illustrious write! You have delighted me completely by the splendor of this incredible poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome piece this evening! My favorite and the most intriguing line has to be, "Amid the numb of winter’s limbs" a very tremendous line! What a special poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 6:42:00 PM
    I always try to pick out a favorite line but what you doin here girl? All are stunning, melancholy and so eloquently written. Okay! IF you insist...'Prickly snow defrocks my gladness'...Oh yes indeed. The 'moody' repeat in the title tops it off...

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 5:57:00 PM
    What a strong intro with a mellow follow-up of a blue feeling this season.This leaves me speechless as the longing for a brighter winter is so intricately marked. Such talent, Nette!