Monsieur L'Vampyre - Fontaine De Jeunesse

Monsieur L'Vampyre - FONTAINE DE JEUNESS
     MONSIEUR L'VAMPYRE - fountain of youth
Into the night, committed to my way,
in sheer delight, and freed from light of day,
I bring no ray of hope for you
if tears are what you're coming to,
and if you're hoping love will ever stay.

I bring the passion! Love that's made from heat
and only physical, but never indiscreet,
if you'll allow my teeth to set 
onto your neck, you'll not forget
acknowledging your life's been incomplete.

When it's all said and done, I'll leave you cold
but never will I leave you growing old,
and what's come from my loving bite
has brought the end, to your delight,
of all the death to which your soul's been sold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 3/2/2012 11:32:00 AM
Thank you for always sharing your excellent poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Veebdosa. I hope you have a great weekend filled with inspiration. I will be back the first of the week and hope to see more of your poetry posted here to read. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2012 7:18:00 PM
Does the name Vee Bdosa have a meaning? Yes there is along story and a short version to it, the short version is that it is sort of an acronym I borrowed from Bill Gates in the early days of Basic programing, I got from the Programers Program put out by an early Microsoft, VISUAL BASIC FOR DOS. VBDos to start the program on your computer, and I squeezed an "a" onto the end when I needed a vampire sounding name. VBDos = Vee Bdosa. Most people do not even know what DOS is today.
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Date: 3/1/2012 6:59:00 PM
enjoyed reading today....your name is unusual does it have a meaning?
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Date: 3/1/2012 4:33:00 PM
Cool! I like this! Very Good!
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Date: 3/1/2012 4:36:00 PM
Thanx Christopher
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