Missing

When you dig deep down into your heart what is it that you find? Do you feel who you are? When I search mine I don’t find feelings of any kind Are they just dormant? Or am I just blind? Have they been extinguished forever? Have they been taken prisoner by these chains that bind? Hopefully they will come back someday soon so I can feel again I need them to help push out the thunderstorm that dominates my mind

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James Fraser

Date: 8/21/2009 2:58:00 PM

Mariana Trench deep this write James, i hope this is fiction>>James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2009 5:35:00 PM

Pushed aside emotions or feeling surface some way, some how, some where. Like the work. Sara

Ciara Aiyana Ashley-Garn

Date: 7/25/2009 5:29:00 PM

wow james this is great!! i love it!! great write and i love how it fits in so well together and how this poem has a very deep and compassionate meaning!! this is great!! keep em coming!!!! Ciara=)