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Messege In a Bottle-Clean-Joe

As I drop this bottle from my lips Exist no more my final sips Sealed with drops of blood and tears This note and my lost years Represents the price Of liquid vice Future seen Sober Clean

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Shaz Cheesman

Date: 12/8/2012 6:50:00 AM

Hey Joe....like this poem very much...not only does it flow nice, it has a great journey and a terrific ending - Shaz

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/16/2012 10:18:00 PM

Hey Joe, happy for you that you were able to read this message in the bottle. Not everyone can see their "lost years"! Hope you were able to maintain keeping "sober and clean"! Best wishes, Mikki

The Fringe

Date: 4/29/2011 8:54:00 PM

Good luck with that. I'm tanked as i write this, haha. but i appreciate the sentiment.

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/19/2011 2:15:00 PM

i am pleased i read this piece today Joe,and my best regards.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 3/9/2011 2:09:00 PM

Hello Joe, This is wonderful, so well done indeed!!! As Always, Shar

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/5/2011 1:02:00 PM

Oh my my!!! I reckon this one will be a winner Joe, absolutely love your approach to the contest :) Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/5/2011 11:43:00 AM

What a different take on the challenge, Joe! And very empowering too-- Really like this one :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/4/2011 11:13:00 PM

lAnother winner here, I think. Great one. Love, Joyce

Ellen Fahey

Date: 3/4/2011 2:25:00 PM

Excellent! Great message! Best of luck to you in the contest! Ellen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2011 1:03:00 PM

The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Joe. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. The best to you in thecontest. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/4/2011 12:42:00 PM

Nice decision and a good message, Joe