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His Forever


          I looked at him and I was lost for words,
those eyes so  d e e p and dark-  so penetrating;
                    he seemed able to look into my soul,
all my thoughts and all my dreams he knew.

          I was unable to look away then he spoke,
he had the most beautiful voice, like music;
                     so calming and soothing to my soul,
other sounds  f a d e d  away and the air was electrified.

          a storm began and the wind howled loudly,
thunder boomed and  r a i n  fell in dreadful torrents;
                     my world began to spin out of control,
I was lost in a whirlwind of emotions and desires.

          I wanted to be part of him-  to be his forever,
his lips were soft, strong   g e n t l e  and demanding;
                      words so sweet that I closed my eyes,
he held me and the pleasure was beyond this world.

          suddenly I felt a change-  a shift in the air,
the storm ended and calmness settled around me;
                       I knew it was over- he was not forever,
after all, just a  s w e e t  messenger in a lovely dream.

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August 3, 2013

Poetry/Verse/His Forever
Copyright Protected, ID 08-4967-700-03
All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

Submitted to the Standard contest, Best Love Poem Ever
sponsor, Laura Loo, Judged 2013

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/28/2016 11:32:00 AM
Broken Wings, just beautiful, as always lady...congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! (sorry for the late comment:)-luloo
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Date: 8/28/2016 8:18:00 AM
Great to read this lovely poem, Constance:) Congratulations:)
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Date: 8/28/2016 1:33:00 AM
Simply beautiful. Congratulations..
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Date: 8/27/2016 11:25:00 PM
Delightful poem. Very well expressed. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/27/2016 10:49:00 PM
So very vivid in emotions and description...I really enjoyed it and I hate the breaking of such lovely dreams!Congrats on your 1st plc. :D Sunita
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Date: 8/27/2016 9:46:00 PM
Wonderful and lovely piece written by a great poetess...Congrats on your well deserved win....Kudos to you,great pal...
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Date: 8/27/2016 3:57:00 PM
What a great dream and poem. Congrats on your win, Broken Wings.
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Date: 8/27/2016 3:53:00 PM
I have had romantic dreams of strangers that were as profound as you describe, making me feel we must have had a connection in another lifetime. This is beautiful Constance and so deserving of first place! Congratulations! I feel honored to be included in your company! 7+ Cheers, Connie ; )
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Date: 8/19/2013 1:49:00 PM
Unique and creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Congats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/16/2013 10:02:00 AM
a very beautiful piece of writing I enjoyed
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Date: 8/16/2013 7:28:00 AM
congrats on your win xx
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Date: 8/15/2013 5:13:00 AM
very poignant and lovely congrats on a fine win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 8/15/2013 12:57:00 AM
congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish
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Date: 8/14/2013 5:40:00 PM
Hello Broken, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ . thank you for the awesome entry. When you have time enjoy the winners on my XOOL blog * Called "Just For You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15796&PoetID=18720 Take care --- xox Linda
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Date: 8/3/2013 1:17:00 PM
Wow, what power you have put into your words my friend! I could easily envision exactly what it was you were trying to describe here Constance! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What an astonishing piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/3/2013 11:30:00 AM
Nicely said poet. I really liked this poem poet
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