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Love Spring -win

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Love Spring -win

Love like a spring that never stops flowing On the arrival at this spring suddenly Venture and rush not to drink devouring Ease, stop and rest for a while quietly. Linger on the long road you have travelled Into your hands then catch up the water Keep your palms, like a cup fully folded Elevate it to your lips with fervor. Spring of love is so infinite and chaste Panic not, the water will never dry Remember never to drink it in haste Failing not be grateful to one you eye. Now the person who you love is a spring Get it but don’t make the spring lowering
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Motif: Philosophical/Spiritual 2-14-14 Dr. Ram Mehta Form: Sonnet (Only Pentameter) Second Place Win Contest: Impress Me with Short Poems III by Giorgio V

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  1. Date: 3/12/2014 6:17:00 PM
    Finding someone to love is a great thing, but becoming obsessed with that person will always lead to trouble. I enjoyed the way you expressed this in a poetic way. Very nicely done, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for all of your kind comments. :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 11:13:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well-deserved win friend Ram ;) have a nice day hugsss

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 2:28:00 AM
    Hi Dr. awesome win. ~ Love ~ SKAT

  1. Date: 3/9/2014 6:22:00 PM
    Wonderful winning poem Dr. Ram! What part of India are you from? I have many many places in your incredible country.

  1. Date: 3/9/2014 4:59:00 PM
    - A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/23/2014 10:36:00 PM
    creatively written poem. I like it friend Ram. Have a blessed day :) :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2014 11:02:00 AM
    a simple yet lovely sonnet, enjoyed reading

  1. Date: 2/18/2014 10:03:00 AM
    I love the message. Great advice! Great poetry. May God bless your day!

  1. Date: 2/18/2014 9:35:00 AM
    Lovely sentiments Dr Ram ...nicely penned

  1. Date: 2/17/2014 4:49:00 PM
    Great write Doc .Enjoyed the read....Peter

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 6:24:00 PM
    Bravo it is so honestly true from those we love comes the water of inspiration and love from which we flow. love the write and thanks for the congrads on my Linda tribute. cheri

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 11:44:00 AM
    Love the metaphoric usage here, really good one, Doc

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 6:50:00 AM
    Nice sonnet read here. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my friend, bl