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With supernovas crashing down my head What was once black turns red instead Dull ideas flashing in my brain Moves as fast as a bullet train The girls dance like swaying trees Trying so hard like those wannabes Still one thing really haunts my mind That even the wisest man cannot define Was it you who made my dreams shatter? With your promises melting like butter Always praying for us to be together But if I asked, you won't even bother When love's eyes melt, she's so uncool The body is shivering like a twisted fool Everything sucks like a blackhole sun Like this poem that is left undone

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Date: 12/23/2024 10:48:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/23/2016 10:12:00 PM
Fredilan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 6:11:00 PM
Fredilan, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/21/2011 7:14:00 AM
good one! intense like her reaction on YOU! and UNDONE is a great word and thought & ending! chaos! Light & Love
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