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Senryu 8 - Lost

tears falling like rain grieving for lost innocence never to be found

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/27/2012 5:37:00 PM
very sad. thank you for your comments on my work
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Date: 8/20/2012 5:34:00 AM
so profound Kim, love this
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Date: 8/19/2012 6:16:00 PM
Wow, what a powerful write this one is! This is an outstanding poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/19/2012 6:04:00 PM
A sensitive senryu, enjoyed reading it tonight.
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