"look At Our Picture, We Are Gone Forever"

Beautiful, how we burn, sweet, how we scream, horizon, what we build, look at it now, is falling 
down, dead less feelings covering mental capacity, dying to build up a wall were the enemy will 
not cross, but a lifetime is not enough for the work we desire, i love the way you scream to me, 
but i feel i want to destroy you, dismember you and bury your remains, ashes? Sympathy walks 
with me and ha no meaning, i don't need sympathy, not today, not morrow, not again, is not i 
will but i must, is not my game but im playing still, the hater of the agony will back off before I 
explode, inside a system, what system? No, i can't understand what is going on, help us! Not 
tonight, not today, sun becomes dark while the moon freezes the heavens with cold 
embracement, is gone, trought the tomb of our parents, but i was told another story, does it 
change history? Help! I need help here, im lost and i don't understand this hell, can't open my 
eyes but the light is making e blind, i don't see trought the hollow bottle but i know there's some 
one on the other side, confusion swallows a mind of horror, is here, is now, is later, were is the 
throne of hades! Were is crecious! Give us back our soul, but who fought alongside me, i don't 
know, place help me now, please explain to me what the world never seen, give me everything, 
but leave me poor, i want to die here, but please help me run, away, were the sun will not burn, 
were the moon will not freeze, hell is light, haven is lighter, but i want hell a place i can rest in 
freedom, but heaven is lighter were the eternity seems coldly calm in bliss, freedom is spread 
on agony, i don't understand this, either do you, how do i see when my eyes are sewed by the 
enemy, how do i scream when my voice is acid burned, how do i hear when all i know is an 
eternal scream, but i still know what happen to the world we once knew...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/11/2010 4:27:00 PM
Very deep and excellent write, a joy to read. Nice job.
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Date: 9/11/2010 1:07:00 PM
deep write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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