"la Vida De Un Diablo"

Diablo, we trust those for when we fall on knees to pray and let them take us, so much 
apetite for thos we have confided, sober the wind we have breath on, take it all if you want, 
but not the time i had with her, i know i broke the rules, i fell in love with an angel, i just cant 
let her go if shes the one who covers my eyes, i sat to make a road with my feelings, mixed 
with love and hate towards the heaven, i never tought an angel was gonna be the one i 
would die for, Diablo, i am the devil who killed the skies, once i let the smoke breath air, 
nothing will stop me, i know she wants this to end in dishonored glory, my prize was love, 
my hate was vanquished, i wonder if my lord will punish me for falling for her beaty, i just 
wish once more i would get the kiss of edens end and fall to pitt with the one i love, she 
fights hard to let this lingering soul be calm and relaxed, now is falling apart, i wonder if is 
going to last for one more day, one more week, i want this eternity, it should fall recklessly 
on dishonor and discourage, easy to find and hard to kep, it slipts like if it was soiled pupet, i 
cant hold her, i cant have her, i wont ever understand this times why so lost, i cant see or 
find myself inside my head, i just wish one more time for it to get rebuilt and stop this 
careless acts of sarcastic sympathy, please god, let my love grow and have the angel i have 
fallen for, my Diablo, my souless chest, is just fullfilling with love and passions, how can this 
happend, my hate is gone, my vengative feelings are dead now, how can an angel kill my 
Diabolous feelings and exchange them in heavenly ones?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/28/2010 12:27:00 PM
Way to go Derek, very impressive and deep for such a life. I enjoyed the way you express one can change the devil inside of all of us..take care,..LeeAnn
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Date: 5/24/2010 8:12:00 AM
este tambien me gusto
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:34:00 AM
Diabolous in murder! i liked this 1
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