Kidnapped Reality Enforced

a girl a child a life of 12 years 
a by stander an innocent with no sense of fear 

coerced, bribed, begged and beckoned 
kidnapped, stolen, beaten and threatened 

the thoughts now that run deep through her head 
is how soon will they find me or soon will i be dead

he gags her, he ties her, he drives her to his lair of death 
her heart, her soul, her mind will soon be at rest 

he picks her up and puts her in a cold damp room 
shes scared as she shivers and ponders her doom 

he needs her so he feeds her as he keeps her alive 
so he takes her and he rapes her for his sexual thrive 

as daylight draws near and the sun starts to rise 
all you see are dry tears that flowed from her eyes 

with bruises and cuts and blood from her thighs 
she was pure no more in her killers eyes 

he despised and hated what she had become 
unknowingly ignoring what he himself done 

his anger and temper begin to arise 
as he contemplates death for this young girls demise 

he cuts off the cord from the lamp on the desk 
he strangles and chokes her until her very last breath 

then he drives her and dumps her small body to rest 
the next morning they find her with a note on her neck 

saying I HAVE JUST STARTED SOMEONE IS NEXT!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/13/2012 3:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this dark, chilling piece, John! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:28:00 PM
ps...no more CSI FOR YOU!!!!!
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:27:00 PM
NEW FAV! :)
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:27:00 PM
Johnny!...Excellent depiction of the mind of a serial killer...I think this should have been in a 3 way tie for first!..Such a great write from your heart of hearts!...Hope you are doing well...wonder how you are doing! Hugs, Gwendolen
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Date: 3/12/2012 4:08:00 PM
Horrid, horrid..nothing else to say Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/12/2012 1:22:00 PM
Congrats john on your win.A dark write..
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Date: 3/12/2012 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Missing" contest John. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:44:00 AM
John congrats on your win,creepy..David
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:59:00 AM
congrats John on a wonderful win for this stirring write luv.. fantastic piece..
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! A dark story - chilling :)
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Date: 11/11/2011 7:53:00 AM
this poem has so much feeling and depth, I love it!! I made you a new fav poet.. cory
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Date: 11/11/2011 7:28:00 AM
God... wow... this is scary dark poem... This is very dark, John. -and I fancy dark poems- :)
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Date: 10/28/2011 4:59:00 PM
Make my hair stand on end. Such graphic horror we just have no comprehension of. Well done John, a difficult subject to cope with.
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Date: 10/27/2011 6:22:00 AM
Well written
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Date: 10/26/2011 7:37:00 AM
John, This is RIVETING! You really got into the mind of the twisted individual who does such heinous crimes. I was looking for some of your work the other day. Always a pleasure to read your creative poetry. I never know what your topic will be..very diverse. (check spell. of lair..looks like liar..I do typos all the time.) Gwendolen
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