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Kaleidoscope Views

Life gifts us kaleidoscope views; the colors change, blend and surprise, a feast for my maturing eyes. Each season gone, a blessed* hue. I've walked through green, faded to gray, awakened to a golden day. All colors rise for their debut. By faith, dark shades will not dilute bright dreams worth my earnest pursuit. While earth spins through a sky of blue, colors transform us and inspire. Love saturates our true desire. I savor hours colored with you. Kaleidoscopes are meant to share. Behold the beauty, flowing there. Life gifts us kaleidoscope views. Each season gone, a blessed* hue. All colors rise for their debut. While earth spins through a sky of blue, I savor hours colored with you. Poem form - constanza **blessed is pronounced with two syllables here

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Date: 10/20/2013 7:26:00 PM
I like this well crafted poem. Lovely. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/17/2013 6:01:00 AM
another lovely piece from you; I love that opening line, life does indeed gift us some 'kaleidoscope views'...congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 10/16/2013 9:14:00 PM
Hello Lovely Rhonda, glad you are back once again.. congrats...LINDA
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Date: 10/15/2013 10:06:00 PM
Rhonda,.. :) Congratulations! --LOVE-- ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/26/2012 5:43:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your super win in Andrea's "Can You Constanza" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2012 9:58:00 AM
Rhonda, :-). Congratulations with your awesome winning poem in Andrea's "Can you Constanza?" contest. Love it, always~ LUV*PD
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Date: 9/24/2012 1:56:00 AM
Belated Congratulations Rhonda xx
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Date: 9/22/2012 9:17:00 PM
Beautiful poem and what a creative write. I really like the use of the idea kaleidoscope in your poem, its unique. Congratulations on your win, well done. Lee
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Date: 9/22/2012 4:04:00 PM
A lovely poem, Rhonda. Congrats on your win! One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/22/2012 3:16:00 PM
Rhonda, this is so dreamy and full of colour! Great win, girl...what a hard contest! :) gwendolen
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Date: 9/22/2012 1:39:00 PM
Perfect use of the form, and nice use of half rhyme too! Congrad's on your win. Light and Love
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Date: 9/22/2012 9:47:00 AM
wonderful win :) congrats
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Date: 9/22/2012 5:23:00 AM
love this Rhonda, congrats
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Date: 9/22/2012 5:10:00 AM
wonderful write Rhonda..... congrats on your win
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Date: 9/22/2012 2:53:00 AM
Wonderful and beautiful piece,Rhonda..Nice constanza...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...
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Date: 9/22/2012 12:41:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your win my dear friend, Rhonda! hugs;) Leonora
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Date: 9/21/2012 11:27:00 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations on your placement in Andrea’s “Can you Constanza? Contest.” There were so many really amazing entries we had a very difficult time deciding. We had to go by who followed the form best, and whose poem was most creative. I spent 4 and half hours going over the poems and Andrea, a lot longer. Thank you so much for your wonderful entry Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 9/21/2012 10:59:00 PM
CONGRATS RHONDA ON A WONDROUS WRITE AND WIN FOR ANOTHER BRILLIANT BEAUTY FROM YOUR FANTASTIC PEN LUV ..
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Date: 9/21/2012 8:39:00 PM
This was so beautiful, Rhonda. I am happy to see it is you here in this second place spot of the Constanza Contest. LOVE this. Congrats.
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Date: 8/26/2012 7:54:00 PM
Sent soup mail. I think! Forgot to double check it went before hitting the back button. Dang! Let me know, toots! Reads winning to me :-) Cyndi
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Date: 8/26/2012 1:28:00 PM
Great work for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck ...Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 8/26/2012 1:15:00 PM
that's a beautiful and colorful poem, nice rhyme. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 8/26/2012 11:39:00 AM
This is a wondrous poem of glory my friend! I believe you have written one of your best poems right here Rhonda! A kaleidoscope of colors bring about a wonderful view, just as you said, a beauty to behold! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/26/2012 2:16:00 AM
Geez, I'm bowled over by your fine writing. I'm on rather a high with the colors you made come alive here. I'm assuming this is for Andrea's constanza contest. The very best of luck to you, Rhonda. :)
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